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So hey there, I'm Flare and I'm bringing you up to date with this new RMT. (I'm not going to say it's the best RMT I have made because that will be meaning I will be hearing a rant from Ben about how I say that on every RMT, despite the fact this is my best RMT yet) :P There, I said it indirectly. Happy enough now, Ben? :D So yeah, it's a pretty fun team to use, and doesn't fail to give me a good battle which I have fun in. I've tried to use stuff that I haven't used before, like the SubDDance Gyarados. I'd like to give a shout-out to Lb for helping me quite a bit with this team. I've tried to use a new format, hope you like it! :D


enter image description here| The Blue
Gyarados @ Leftovers: I wanted to try something new, as I hadn't ever used this set before.
Trait: Moxie: This allows me to get more attack without having to use Dragon Dance again.
EVs: 88 HP / 168 Atk / 252 Spd: Standard BulkyDos EV's, I can't be hit by Rachi's Body Slam.
Adamant Nature: Gives me more attack, and the speed is covered up by Dragon Dance.

  • Substitute: Gives me a free Dragon Dance or Attack when I need to set up.
  • Dragon Dance: Boosts my Attack and Speed to epic levels, ready to sweep.
  • Bounce: Gives me one turn of recovery, and STAB, good paralysis chance.
  • Waterfall: Other STAB, hits stuff like Tyranitar and Heatran, and OHKO's after +1.

enter image description here|The Green
Breloom @ Toxic Orb: Works really well with an offensive core alongside Gyarados.
Trait: Poison Heal: So that I can get HP back after using Substitute and Spore.
EVs: 12 HP / 244 Atk / 252 Spd: HP Ev's give me HP number 264 which means I can get equal Subs.
Adamant Nature: Gives me some great power, and speed isn't needed too much on this.
- Substitute: Allows me to set up Focus Punch and hit hard.
- Focus Punch: Works great with Spore and Substitute, and that powah :D
- Seed Bomb: Another STAB, hit's everything Focus Punch doesn't.
- Spore: Let's me do everything on this set more freely and I can't get damaged.
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enter image description here|The Gold
Jirachi @ Leftovers: Stealth Rock setter, and counter check to many things.
Trait: Serene Grace: Gives all my moves more probablity of being bosses and haxing :D
EVs: 216 HP / 48 SAtk / 244 SDef: 48 SpA EV's allow me to OHKO Scizor, and become a good SpD wall.
Sassy Nature: Boosts my special defensive capabilities to the maximum.

  • Hidden Power [Fire]: Main check to Ferrotress and OHKO's Scizor with EV's.
  • Stealth Rock: Provides a more offensive presence to my team, easier to sweep.
  • Thunderbolt: Hit's stuff like Starmie, Tentacruel and the Jelly on switch-ins.
  • Iron Head: Flinching stuff to death is how I like to (t)roll :D

enter image description here| The Grey
Salamence @ Choice Scarf: My trusty scarfer, and best late-game cleaner, in my opinion.
Trait: Moxie: 2nd Moxie sweeper, and gives it's Outrage a bit more anger.
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SAtk / 252 Spd: Standard Physical Attacking EV's with 4 SpA for Fire Blast.
Naive Nature: So that I don't drop Fire Blast's power around.

  • Fire Blast: First move to use against Steel types and roasting them.
  • Earthquake: Gives good coverage, and just a nice move in general :D
  • Dragon Claw: First STAB, and nice accuracy and power. Good move.
  • Outrage: This is the move to use once Steel Types are out of the way. Open sweeping.

enter image description here| The Pink
Chansey (F) @ Eviolite: My dedicated Physical wall, and actually Special as well :3
Trait: Natural Cure: Allows me to switch into Toxic or WOW, then switch straight away.
EVs: 36 HP / 252 Def / 220 SDef: Gives me 325 wish passes and bulk in both defenses.
Bold Nature: Just gives me more defence to take some hits like a boss.

  • Thunder Wave: Supports Breloom and Gyarados, both not a whole lot fast.
  • Wish: Supports all my team mates, and gives Chansey some HP too.
  • Protect: Scouting, and also getting Wish HP fulled up to da max.
  • Seismic Toss: Does good damage to everything and anything (for Chansey at least).

enter image description here| The Yellow
Alakazam @ Life Orb: This is my dedicated Special Sweeper, and for using at the end of the game.
Trait: Magic Guard: Provides me with immunity to anything non-attacking move.
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd: Standard special attacking spread, speed and power.
Serious Nature: Gives me more speed, and becomes one of the fastest non-scarf Pokemon in OU.

  • Calm Mind: Since most people expect a full attacking Kazam, I go for CM when they switch.
  • Focus Blast: Hits Ferrothorn and all that that normally wall the crpa out of me.
  • Psyshock: Hits Tentacruel and other special Walls (and the pink blobs) very hard.
  • Hidden Power [Ice]: Hits dragons nicely, and with the 4x weaknesses to most, it's great.

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I have so much more stuff to put. Screw character limit. :(
Um... why don't you name Salamence 'The Orange' instead? I mean, he doesn't look grey. =P
Please change the name. Posting gibberish as your title doesn't do a whole lot but get annoying.
As for the team itself, Scarf Terrakion could be a problem, which brings me to my second point; your Rock weakness and no spinner to fix it. Maybe replace Salamence for Donphan, which can Spin, set rocks for you (Which will help your sweepers a ton), and allow you to defend against Terrakion a bit. I suggest the standard physically defensive Donphan, which means you'll have to wittle down any Dragons/Landoruses before you squish them with Ice Shard, but it still at least gives you that assurance.
Flare you make a team every weak and every time it's the best RMT.
I make a team every "weak" what? lol go to school before posting :3
And btw, every team I make is improved from the previous one, so in theory, every team is better than the prrvious one
*week xD
Oh well that title is actually pretty cool, thanks DF :3
Flare don't put the comment in every RMT :P
This is border line compared to allot of your other teams xD
No team could ever be the best you ever made if it was only made and tested in the duration of a week. Don't post RMT's all the time, try actually take time on the team and get lots of battles to eliminate problems yourself.

Try not to take this the wrong way but you post far to often and it shows. The comment doesn't make people think better of the team if it doesn't look as good. Your last few RMT's have all been similar quality which hasn't been as good as it has been. Everybody wants proof nowadays so why not prove it is a good team. This can be done through a ladder score, replay or the fact you beat other users on the site (just a note: a replay proving the greatness of the team is not a pure sweep with Breloom....). The longer you battle and stick with the team, the better it becomes. Ask people in the know or in chat on their opinions (MK has been asking for my opinion allot recently and though I may not be brilliant, it has been helping). The more you battle the better the team becomes. You realize your threats and weaknesses. "Baton Pass my Ass" was a team made by a Smogon user. At first it was crap but after a year of sticking with it and editing it after discovering problems, he peaked #1 on the ladder. Not once but many times on many alts. That team was one of the best I had ever seen. Even just an extra weak on the team could really improve it.

This is where a team building process and Threats list comes in and really shows off your RMT and helps. Most people on the site uses them wrong....  (this may not apply to you but you could impliment this as it really helps a rater)
Why have a team building process if all you are going to put is then I added Starmie...
http://pokemondb.net/pokebase/rmt/21135/where-do-uu-think-youre-going This has a probably the best one on this site I have seen so far.
If you use the team, chances are you will change the Pokemon around to fix problems. Mention this so people don't make the same mistakes.

A threats list also. This really helps and does show the team is pretty good. It shows you have considered the threats and delegated them some type of check. However it shows people where the problems are making it easier to rate. If you can get rid of a threat then do it yourself. Better posting an improved team than a not so good team.

Having a good team makes it much easier to rate. Some teams (I'm not saying this one wont) will not get far unless the team is completely changed. If you can get rid of these problems before hands, raters can polish the team off rather than giving you the exact same team you could have made yourself.

Take time on teams :)

BTW sorry bout that. On another note the format is brilliant I shall steel it, claim it as mine and call it Ted.
@Last line of rant: Ivy for stealing it but me and Ted are gonna work together a lot more often :D
Oh and for the teambuilding process, I actually had it, but I had to remove it because of the limit and keep the needed things :'/
You don't have to have one but it does help show the qualities of your team off :P If you are going to say the team is the best yet every time.
Where is a priority user?
Had to actually read this figure out it wasn't gen 3 OU, even though you're using Chansey.
This isn't Gen 3 OU...
lol, typo. I read it seeing there were gen V qualities, but when I saw the sprites, it through me off. It would be strange to see Chansey on gen 3 team.
Whoops, accidently clicked the Hide Button... -_-
I believe Gibberish is spelled g-i-b--->**(B)**<---e-r-i-s-h
lol yeah Giga, but it was Dr.Nub who edited that title, so blame him for that :D

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