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PX Hyper Offence Attempt 01, Please rate and suggest?

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I am being slightly lazy today so writing will be at a minimum, no descriptions or fancy story telling. Just a short background check. Enjoy!

One day...as my head peaked over the white bed sheets, crumpled and
torn from another restless slumber...an inviting, flickering sound
crept up my balcony followed by a light drone type of noise. I
realised it was the computer. It had been left on all night, on my
profile...on showdown. My curiosity compelled me to see what it was
doing...I appeared to have left it on team builder...with a new piece
of work titled "PX Hyper offence OU 01". I was not sure what to make
of it...so I wanted to see what the good people of the DB thought.

Well...no story telling my eye...I kinda got carried away there...never mind. Thanks for reading and rating! (not one of my best works...the story I mean..no actually, both. I do have experience in story writing)


Gyarados

Gyarados @ Water Gem
Trait: Moxie
EVs: 252 Spd / 252 Atk / 4 HP
Adamant Nature
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Waterfall
- Ice Fang


Donphan

Donphan @ Leftovers
Trait: Sturdy
EVs: 252 HP / 4 SDef / 252 Def
Impish Nature
- Stealth Rock
- Rapid Spin
- Earthquake
- Ice Shard


Darmanitan

Darmanitan @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Sheer Force
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 Spd / 4 SDef
Adamant Nature
- Flare Blitz
- U-turn
- Superpower
- Rock Slide


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Virizion @ Leftovers
Trait: Justified
EVs: 252 SAtk / 222 SDef / 34 Def
Modest Nature
- Calm Mind
- Giga Drain
- Focus Blast
- Hidden Power [Ice]


Hydreigon

Hydreigon @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 252 SAtk / 252 Spd / 4 SDef
Modest Nature
- Draco Meteor
- Fire Blast
- Focus Blast
- Surf


Conkeldurr

Conkeldurr @ Leftovers
Trait: Guts
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 HP / 4 SDef
Adamant Nature
- Bulk Up
- Drain Punch
- Ice Punch
- Mach Punch

I thanks those who help in anyway very deeply. Thanks you so much guys ;}

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asked Apr 3, 2013 by ReadyAimFire
edited Apr 3, 2013 by Flare
All Offensive teams have SR :D Just Donphan is not an offensive Pokemon and looses momentum and that
Actually offensive Donphan is pretty boss. just saying
Banded Donphan! I wonder how much a banded Rapid Spin would do, lol.
I'm sorry, but you apparently don't know the difference between Hyper Offense and Balanced Offense / Bulky Offense.
Apparanly I don't...but that's because I don't like HO that much. I am used too balnced. And Aldo, Doc and Ben do have good points on this. But yeah....i guess your right.

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