Nitpicking your nitpicking :3
As I said, it's all in all better than I expected. But of course, nitpicking.
"Over the next decade or so, they lived in the massive jungle"
...You mean these are older kids? Wow, big lame [I don't know if the original Dragon Ball mentioned this in the English version, but the small Goku you know and love...is 14. Giru and BM Saiyans are ~13 years old at the time they found Gohan. I probably should specified it, but yeah]. Personally, I liked them being roughly around Gohan's age [Stupid brain forgtetting Gohan small dumb dumb dumb]. Of course his age would depend on the point in the story, but small Gohan hanging around small Bee Saiyan and small Giru Saiyan is actually pretty amusing. The advantage to them being older is that they could, and likely would, act like little kids still, which would also be funny. But that aside, small Saiyans for the win [among us].
Mar 28, 2023
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BM™
Backstory stuff (about time):
(Originally, when I was thinking about the concepts, I was thinking of kind of, y'know, "taking inspiration" from Goku's backstory, which I then realized would be tough, but then...this idea came to mind)
Alrighty, so a long long time ago, when Frieza's forces were invading Planet Vegeta, two families realized they would not survive the onslaught. However, these families observed a lower-class saiyan family do the same for their son, so the two families figured that putting their children (one family had a son, the other had a daughter) in space pods and sending them into deep space would at least slightly improve their childrens' survival. Fearing that the children might die within the first few days of space travel, they put their children in space pods designed for years of space travel, acting as a sort of coma-inducing pod, so no resources would need to be used, and it would halt nearly all biological processes, essentially freezing the kids in time as they flew through the void. For years, the two kids would traverse the emptiness of space. but their pods would always remain relatively close to one another. And on one fateful, after years of travel, the pods entered the Earth's atmosphere and crash landed in a remote jungle. The first pod opened, revealing a young Saiyan boy, who would be known as BM, and in the other pod emerged a young Saiyan girl named Giru. Not knowing where they were, the spent the first few hours exploring their surroundings. Eventually, they found a massive tree from which they would find shelter in. Over the next few days, the duo became better friends, and their personalities began to show more, with Giru being a rather bratty girl, and BM being quite lazy. Over the next decade or so, they lived in the massive jungle, and that was their life. However, getting rather bored with their monotonous lifestyle, the Saiyan pair decided to travel beyond the massive jungle they called home, eventually stumbling upon a small town, where they spent their first day there digging inside dumpsters, confused as to why the residents were throwing away such great food, but the biggest surprise to them was the lifestyle of the townsfolk. Not only were they NOT wearing armor (courtesy of Saiyan heritage) but they all had a lack of tails, something that the pair had never seen before. Eventually, as the young Saiyans were chased out of the dumpsters they ravaged, they happened upon a young man named Gohan...and the rest is history
Mar 28, 2023
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BM™
"so spongebob lives in a circular pineapple, but the inside has corners?"
"The man lives in a PINEAPPLE UNDER THE SEA and has a SNAIL THAT MEOWS... and you're concerned with the architectural accuracy of his home like everything else makes perfect f***ing sense."
Mar 26, 2023
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Ditto
