Thanks! I love that kind of feedback and if you have someone you wanna share it to go for it also if thers any tweaks you wanna suggest plz do
Apr 13, 2020
by
Dyla N
Here goes (the title was french so i’ll try to spell it in english)
Curque Dur Anceal (the Rainbow circus)
Neona has only known life as a circus a performer her parents never even really named her she was just “Neona” her mother was from a wealthy family who wanted her to marry a doctor but she net Neona’s dad one day while the circus was in town and she never looked back. In the circus her mother was called Pastella and dad Primo they were a clown couple. At age 17 Neona discovers a love for fashion but theres no place for fashion in a circus. Primo says if Neona wants iut she can go with his blessing but Pastella wishes her daughter to stay and is very vocal about it. Then one night during a performance the circus catches fire and everyone is trapped the ringmaster says that if he can’t have Primo for himself no one can and attacks Neina’s dad leaving him mortaly wounded and dying slowly in pain the last thing Primo does before dying is give Neona his signature Phenix pendant and says “go my daughter...go...live out your dream...be...like this phenix...and rise from the ashes...” after he dies Neina runa as fast and as far away as possible, four uears later with a bew name and a bew life she returns to where the circus once stood now nothing more than blackened strips if fabric that are turning to dust it’s there she revounts her story to her boyfriend.
Apr 13, 2020
by
Dyla N
Happy Easter! :P
Apr 12, 2020
by
Staka~
Thanks for editing your answer!
Apr 9, 2020
by
~Dreamer~
seesee
Apr 9, 2020
by
Gau