Wall for y-chai (page 270)

Yup. Don't worry, it's probably about over, as I'm not keen on continuing me and X's convo.

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I asked on X’s wall if there is anythinv i can dl to help you two with the  “topic” that keeps getting brought up please let me know what if anything ivcan do to help

Um... hello...?

So what point are you currently at in the fanfic?

I don't know why your lip is quivering, but whatever. You managed Pika in the first chapter so well, but your ideas made it look like you didn't understand her at all. She's shy and nervous around him, and shy and nervous people don't randomly kiss or confess their love to a boy, I don't believe. I'm not trying to control your fanfic, but I just can't accept those, they butcher Pika's character.

(sighs) All right. To be blunt, I kinda hate them both and would love it if you did not use them. No sudden kissing, no sudden confession, no. That's NOT how Pika acts, and it'd make her look way out of character. It feels like you didn't even read my guide, because you thought of using the exacr thing I wanted to avoid.

OK! :)

Can I hear them? I'll give you my opinions.

I'm glad. And I am curious about how you're gonna handle the Pika x Gladion ship, but I dunno if you got any ideas for it yet.