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Hi I have decide to create a mono Ghost team for a competition.
This is the team

Froslass (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Snow Cloak
EVs: 248 HP / 8 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Spikes
- Destiny Bond
- Taunt
- Ice Beam

Froslass is the lead of the team

Chandelure (M) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Modest Nature
- Fire Blast
- Energy Ball
- Shadow Ball
- Hidden Power [Fighting]

Chandelure is the special sweeper

Jellicent (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Water Absorb
EVs: 252 HP / 36 Def / 220 SpD
Calm Nature
- Recover
- Toxic
- Taunt
- Night Shade

Jellicent is the special wall

Golurk @ Leftovers
Ability: Iron Fist
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 Def
Adamant Nature
- Substitute
- Focus Punch
- Earthquake
- Shadow Punch

Golurk is the physical sweeper

Sableye (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Prankster
EVs: 252 HP / 120 Def / 136 SpD
Calm Nature
- Will-O-Wisp
- Taunt
- Recover
- Sunny Day

Sableye is another wall

Gengar (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Substitute
- Pain Split
- Shadow Ball
- Focus Blast

Gengar is the special sweeper.

I tried this team but it isn't very good.
Thank you for rate my team

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All I can say is you're using Jellicent the wrong way. Use that instead:

Jellicent @ Leftovers:
Trait: Water Absorb
EVs: 248 HP / 252 SDef / 8 Speed
Calm Nature

~ Will O Wisp
~ Scald
~ Toxic
~ Recover
There's a lot more wrong with this team than just the Jelli
Mind if you please add in extra detail?
You could elaborate more than
"<Pokemon> is my <role>"
Three sentences are good. Sentence one should be why you looked at the Pokemon and said "it's a masterpiece, it needs to be in my team!" Don't say he's your favourite -- remember, we're competitive here! Sentence two should be its role, and don't just say what it is, say how it performs it. The last should be a small description of its set. Of course, the three sentence thing isn't a rule, but it's good to use to gauge if you've written enough or not. And don't be afraid to write more than three, we need as much detail as we need.

If this is regarded as minimodding to the mods, I'll hide this if needed.
If minimod posts would be hidden about 70% of my RMT posts would be gone.

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