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I'm stuck between a ladder of 1450 and 1500. Please give any honest, harsh comments about my team. Thank you.

I have changed many things from the 3 days I have posted this question.

Landorus-Therian @ Rocky Helmet
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: 248 HP / 8 Atk / 252 Def
Impish Nature
- U-turn
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge
- Stealth Rock

Milotic (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Marvel Scale
EVs: 248 HP / 252 Def / 8 SpA
Bold Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Scald
- Ice Beam
- Toxic
- Recover

Heatran (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: 248 HP / 252 SpA / 8 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Flamethrower
- Flash Cannon
- Earth Power
- Protect

Manectric-Mega (M) @ Manectite
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk / 30 Def
- Thunderbolt
- Volt Switch
- Flamethrower
- Hidden Power [Ice]

Bisharp (M) @ Lum Berry
Ability: Defiant
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Pursuit
- Sucker Punch
- Iron Head
- Swords Dance

Serperior @ Leftovers
Ability: Contrary
EVs: 56 HP / 200 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk / 30 SpA / 30 Spe
- Leaf Storm
- Hidden Power [Fire]
- Substitute
- Leech Seed

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In my opinion, this is a good team. However, I have two fixes:

 - Milotic's place in this team is debatable. Milotic's place in OU itself is debatable, as I see no real role it fills. While Haze is nice and Milotic's bulk is undeniably good, it does feel passive and is forced out by a few threats of the meta such as any Electric-type Pokémon (read: Thundurus, Rotom-W), Serperior, Venusaur-mega, Tangrowth, Ferrothorn and more. I am not convinced. What could replace it? I have no honest clue so you've got to clarify its role in a comment.
 - Hidden Power Ground is better for Serperior. It beats Steel- and Fire-type Pokémon as well as Heatran who otherwises forces Serperior out.

These are my remarks.
Singles, right?
I feel like without Serperior, Ground types would give this team a bit of trouble. So just keep Serperior alive. But yeah, replace Milotic for something like Swampert or maybe even Suicune or something. I don't know. I spend most of my time in UU.
Thank you for the comments.
Yes, this is for single OU, and I meant Milotic to be a wall. Yesterday, I have noticed many drawbacks of Milotic by being single - typed mon and replaced with Unaware Quagsire, which is a significant threat to Sword Dance - reliant sweepers, especially Scizor.
I understand the good point you are mentioning on HP - Ground, but I always find Scizor walling me more often than Heatran, while I can simply force Heatran away with my Landorus.

I have gone through some major change of my team, and I would be appreciated for more comments.

Rotom-Wash @ Leftovers  
Ability: Levitate  
EVs: 252 HP / 4 SpA / 252 SpD  
Calm Nature  
IVs: 0 Atk  
- Volt Switch  
- Hydro Pump  
- Will-O-Wisp  
- Toxic  

Jirachi @ Leftovers  
Ability: Serene Grace  
EVs: 248 HP / 8 Atk / 252 Spe  
Jolly Nature  
- Stealth Rock  
- U-turn  
- Iron Head  
- Healing Wish  

Talonflame (M) @ Choice Band  
Ability: Gale Wings  
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe  
Jolly Nature  
- Brave Bird  
- Flare Blitz  
- U-turn  
- Steel Wing  

Metagross-Mega @ Metagrossite  
Ability: Tough Claws  
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe  
Jolly Nature  
- Meteor Mash  
- Bullet Punch  
- Earthquake  
- Power-Up Punch  

Quagsire (M) @ Rocky Helmet  
Ability: Unaware  
EVs: 248 HP / 4 Atk / 252 Def / 4 SpD  
Impish Nature  
- Scald  
- Earthquake  
- Toxic  
- Recover  

Serperior @ Leftovers  
Ability: Contrary  
EVs: 56 HP / 200 SpA / 252 Spe  
Timid Nature  
IVs: 0 Atk / 30 SpA / 30 Spe  
- Leaf Storm  
- Hidden Power [Fire]  
- Substitute  
- Leech Seed
You do realize that you can (usually) edit a question after you post it.
i rate your team 8/10 . cool team

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