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feelurRage (Crawdaunt) (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Adaptability
Shiny: No
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 SpD
Adamant Nature
- Crabhammer
- Aqua Jet
- Knock Off
- Swords Dance

DoomsDay (Blissey) @ Leftovers
Ability: Natural Cure
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Bold Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Ice Beam
- Toxic
- Soft-Boiled
- Protect

SwatLo (Swellow) (F) @ Flame Orb
Ability: Guts
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Facade
- Brave Bird
- Roost
- U-turn

OppositeDay (Serperior) (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Contrary
Shiny: No
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Leaf Storm
- Leech Seed
- Substitute
- Hidden Power [Fire]

Cruster (Crobat) (M) @ Black Sludge
Ability: Infiltrator
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Brave Bird
- Defog
- U-turn
- Roost

SaltySaur (Aerodactyl-Mega) (M) @ Aerodactylite
Ability: Tough Claws
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Hone Claws
- Aerial Ace
- Stone Edge
- Ice Fang

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the Umbreon is not  a big problem but it needs a attack move like i use Moonblast  and  your team is a tiny bit weak to steel hard hitters and steel walls so if the other team has one of those steel pokes save your Metagross or get walled hard or hit hard but lucky they are uncommon in UU but other than all that good team hope i helped
jsut change my team XD
Replace Swellow with Scizor for more type variety and less shared weaknesses. Replace Blissey's ice beam and protect with seismic toss for more damage and heal bell to cure teammates. Give Crobat a flyinium Z to break certain walls. Replace Aerodactyl's hone claws and aerial ace with earthquake to cover rock and steel and pursuit to trap dark-weak Pokemon.

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You have no revenge killer so I suggest changing the jolteon set to scarf.

Salt-Eon (Jolteon) (M) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Volt Absorb
Shiny: No
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Volt Switch
- Thunderbolt
- Shadow Ball

Also, since you're running defog Crobat, I'd run a bulkier set.

Crobat @ Black Sludge
Ability: Infiltrator
EVs: 120 HP / 136 Atk / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature
- Brave Bird
- Taunt
- U-turn
- Defog

I suggest taunt because it stops the smeargles and sash brelooms and will-o-wisp users that your team is weak to.

Other than that I think it looks good!
Best wishes on your laddering!:)

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Aerodactyl is already a perfectly fine revenge-killer (though it has no priority attacks, but Jolteon doesn't either), so making Jolteon a revenge-killer seems unnecessary and a waste of a team slot. In fact, I don't think Jolteon is good for anything in UU, so I would suggest simply replacing it with a scarf Magneton. Also, how does removing roost make Crobat bulkier? Sure, taunt is a good move, but roost is also necessary. If you want to use taunt, then the best thing to replace would probably be U-turn.
Aerodactyl isn't a revenge killer. He has Hone Claws so it's acting as a late game cleaner. So Choice scarf on Jolteon would be the preferred item.
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Why can't Aerodactyl be both a late-game cleaner and a revenge-killer? It's fast enough to do both.