Pokémon Rate My Team
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Someone please rate my team!

This is not how I think:

Scizor-Mega (M) @ Scizorite
Ability: Technician
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 248 HP / 252 Atk / 10 SpD
Adamant Nature
- Swords Dance
- Bug Bite
- Bullet Punch
- Knock Off

Jirgrachi (Jirachi) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Serene Grace
EVs: 252 Atk / 6 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Iron Head
- Zen Headbutt
- Play Rough
- Ice Punch

Celesteela @ Leftovers
Ability: Beast Boost
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 6 SpD
Bold Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Leech Seed
- Protect
- Toxic
- Substitute

Garchomp (F) @ Rocky Helmet
Ability: Rough Skin
EVs: 252 Atk / 6 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Earthquake
- Dragon Claw
- Iron Head

Greninja-Ash @ Focus Sash
Ability: Battle Bond
EVs: 252 SpA / 6 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Surf
- Dark Pulse
- Extrasensory
- Ice Beam

Landorus-Therian @ Yache Berry
Ability: Intimidate
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 6 SpD
Adamant Nature
- Knock Off
- Earthquake
- Bulk Up
- Brick Break

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You don't have hazard control, at all. You could tweak Landorus to have either Defog or Stealth Rock. Brick Break seems pointless. If it's to break screens, Defog does that. Besides, unless you remove rocks on your side, Greninja's focus sash is wasted.

Then comes your other problem: your team is vulnerable to Magnezone! With three steel types that can barely touch it, it will T-bolt and HP Fire its way through half your team once the two ground type are dealt with (see below).

Having both Garchomp and Landorus being weak to ice beam makes you an easy target for anything fast with ice beam, but that can be dealt with by a steel switchin, which you don't have a shortage of, so you have that going for you

There's also a lack of explosive power to your team, which relies on setting up. Both Garchomp and Scizor need to set up before they can deal heavy damage, and that leaves only two Pokemon capable of hitting hard and fast. To remedy this, Greninja/Landorus can opt for a z move, which makes them immediately way more threatening.

That's what I think, anyway. Actual testing might prove it's more effective than it looks on paper.
Hooray, my team has been rated. I have replays of this team on Pokémon Showdown, to see them just go to showdown’s replay area and enter The Poipole.

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