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Weather Team

Kyogry (Kyogre-Primal) @ Blue Orb
Kyogre
Ability: Primordial Sea
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Origin Pulse
- Ice Beam
- Ancient Power
- Thunderbolt
Ice Beam for Grass type cover, Origin Pulse for STAB and Thunderbolt and Ancient Power for side effects.
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Groudy (Groudon-Primal) @ Red Orb
Groudon
Ability: Desolate Land
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Precipice Blades
- Dynamic Punch
- Earthquake
- Dragon Tail
Precipice Blades for STAB, Earthquake for oppoments who are using Dig, Dragon Tail for a force switch out and Dynamic Punch as an extra.
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Ray (Rayquaza-Mega) @ Focus Sash
Rayquaza
Ability: Delta Stream
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpA / 252 Spe
Hasty Nature
- Dragon Ascent
- Blizzard
- Dragon Claw
- Brick Break
Dragon Claw and Dragon Ascent for STAB, Blizzard for dealing against other Dragons, Brick Break for Shields Breaking and Against nasty Ice Types.
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Vulpy (Ninetales-Alola) (F) @ Mago Berry
Ninetales
Ability: Snow Warning
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Dark Pulse
- Hypnosis
- Blizzard
- Aurora Veil
Dark Pulse for the Flinching Chance, Hypnosis for Sleep, Blizzard for STAB and Freeze chance, Aurora Veil for Halving damage.
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Tyrani (Tyranitar) (F) @ Tyranitarite
Tyranitar
Ability: Sand Stream
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 SpD
Adamant Nature
- Aqua Tail
- Crunch
- Earthquake
- Ice Fang
Second Staller · Mega Evolving Pokemon, Aqua Tail and Earthquake for Emergencies, Ice Fang for Freezing and Crunch for STAB
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Leafy (Leafeon) @ Choice Band
Leafeon
Ability: Leaf Guard
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Leaf Blade
- Knock Off
- Synthesis
- Protect
Leaf Blade for high critical hit ratio and STAB, Knock Off against Psychic types and Knocking off held items, Synthesis heals up Leafeon and Protect for defense(especially to stall a bit from a Max Move).
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If you're new to competitive play, I recommend doing some reading before teambuilding. Your first builds are going to be very rough (and this team is not very good, to be sure) but you can mitigate that with an understanding of the metagame. Read:
* Ubers analyses: https://www.smogon.com/dex/sm/formats/uber/
* Usage stats (especially the 'moveset' directory): https://www.smogon.com/stats/
* Ubers subforums on Smogon, e.g. viability rankings.

Here is some other loose advice:
- Play with your team yourself before you ask other people to rate it.
- Mega Rayquaza is banned in Ubers.
- Don't pick moves for their luck-based secondary effects. Ancient Power, Dark Pulse and Ice Fang are not good choices where you've used them. Thunderbolt happens to be OK coverage on Kyogre, but it's outclassed by Thunder.
- I feel like you've deliberately put one Pokemon with each weather setting ability into this team. In any case, that is not a good strategy. You should not be thinking about that when you're teambuilding.
- Coverage moves on offensive Pokemon are for hitting Pokemon that wall/resist your most powerful attack. The priority is not to have a super-effective attack for Pokemon you match poorly against defensively (though often there is overlap). This is why you should use V-create instead of Blizzard on Rayquaza, for example.
- Justify your choices more than just saying 'Brick Break for shields'. We know what the move does -- *why* do you want that effect instead of others? Are screens particularly common in Ubers?
- Offensive Pokemon with four attacks and no means of boosting their power are impotent. I wouldn't call four-attacks Tyranitar a 'staller' either.
- Ninetales is a bad pick for Ubers, and Leafeon is even worse. Resist the temptation to use personal favourites, and if you must, build around them in a format where they make sense.
- Choice Band + Protect + Synthesis is less than ideal.

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