Wall for Amethyst (page 731)

Oh yes, terrible

Ok I’ll get thousands and thousands of points then and you’ll never catch me.

This is also a joke.

https://pokemondb.net/pokebase/163153/what-is-a-good-in-game-team-for-pokemon-x-and-y?show=342195#a342195

Here’s the link for the team. Note that Lucario and Aegislash overlap types.... but I think it’ll still work nice.

Let’s see the part wherd Anders tries to get Collinx to leave.
It was a good length I like how he kept trying to get the other huy to listen, i’d only have a teeny bit mire of denial or have him consider it but then change his mind (so he dies either way but maybe a moment where he  realizes  The other guy wax right)
Deoxys’s entrance.
It was a bit fast but asduming the reader is suppused to hate Deoxys it was good. Myself i’d give Deoxys a bit of background so the reader aims a teeny bit of understanding ask yourself “why is Deoxys killing? Was he hurt in the crash.  Did sonething happen in it’s padt to make it hate every luvinv thing?” Tha’s all i got hope ut helps

You left before I got back, this isn’t really all that dark the grossest part was the guy vomiting. No feedback really unlesx u got slecfic questions u want nevto answer, very good writting i keep getting sad at the end cuz it’s ended when u have more i’ll read jf if h like and why would i mind deleting it? It is deleted just seemed odd “want me to dekete it after?” That’s me you “if you don’t mind”

I-I’ll read it too... I mean it was extremely well written, otherwise it wouldn’t have had such a traumatizing impact on me.

Would I? Yes! Of course I wanna read it  if yoh want ne to, that’s a silly question cuz for one YOU wrote it so it’s gotta be well done. your a very good written and for two it’s a brand new way of looking at the Pokemon world

Professor Kukui is currently being bitten by a Riolu, soon to be Lexi’s Riolu.

Oh so I’m not doing great that’s sad.

Uhhh yeah me either so I’ll take a page out of Glazio’s book. Ik this has been answered but....

HOW’S THE FEEEEEEENFEEEEEEEC?