Wall for BM™ (page 32)

"Oh, I get it. You're scared! I guess you have too much fat to fit in any guts!" -Giru Saiyan making a big mistake (albeit a somewhat funny one)

Actually it says he's twelve by the first World Martial Arts Tournament he fights in. Which means he's about fifteen by the second. Imagine him being older than me and half my height smh my head. That tiger skin though. Regardless, I still want them to be around Gohan's age, and you said he was... what, around seven by the Frieza arc? Or am I thinking of something else? If that's true, and they were about his age and introduced to him early on in the plot, that would make them small kids.

Small Giru Saiyan (she's a far bigger brat than she is tall)

As I said, it's all in all better than I expected. But of course, nitpicking.

"Over the next decade or so, they lived in the massive jungle"
...You mean these are older kids? Wow, big lame. Personally, I liked them being roughly around Gohan's age. Of course his age would depend on the point in the story, but small Gohan hanging around small Bee Saiyan and small Giru Saiyan is actually pretty amusing. The advantage to them being older is that they could, and likely would, act like little kids still, which would also be funny. But that aside, small Saiyans for the win.

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO sexy. what school?

spill the tea

What the heck happened to Giru Saiyan and Bee Saiyan? You've made no mention of parents. Are they dead or something? How long ago has, say, Bee Saiyan been on his own? Where are those kids, anyway? Got important backstory questions here.

rear appendage

"I named my shiny Xurkitree Xurkitree."
Autocorrect you son of a-
I meant Xurkit.

I have a shiny Buzzwole named Bee Pen if that counts. I think I named my shiny Xurkitree Xurkitree.

Titlen't

- I assumed that if pulling on it just... makes a kid so weak he can't even hold up a Dragon Ball, losing it would weaken you at least a little. Or at the very least hurt like hell. It also seems to throw off balance (which is forgotten about after five minutes in Dragon Ball, very unfortunate because it was a wonderful touch and I loved it) until you adjust to no longer having a rear appendage. Who wouldn't want to watch gimpy Giru Saiyan stumbling around and crying about her destroyed pride or something? Also, Bee Pen ripping off Pickle Oh how blatantly shameless. And in the same series too. Like really mate? I said I wanted her to lose her tail, not that I wanted her to lose it in such a lame way.

If you wanted it to be over-the-top, why'd you ask me if I wanted it to be serious or not? I said serious. Sheesh. On the plus side, you said they're bad, so I'm right. Gotta savor the little victories.