I forgot to mention before but if there are any significant edits that you do can I see the edited version, as we go you can edit my chapters if I don’t accurately portray your characters Something like that that’s totally up to you though we don’t have to.
Feb 4, 2022
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Dyla N
Oh I did not see your post until after I posted chapter 5. If you want to you can edit it so that they mentioned project Moonstone more specifically. Awesome, that does sound like a really cool power No you didn’t really ask but here are some name ideas
A
Mandy:Mandi
Madison
Mara
Margaret
Margot ( you don’t pronounce the T)
Mala
Minnie
I could probably spin out a lot more “m” names but then you all will be a bunch of spam names lol. Anyway I’m quite proud of chapter 5 it’s the longest chapter I’ve ever written on anything that’s been posted on here and they’re only a couple spelling errors that my spellcheck wouldn’t pick up and I didn’t know how to go back to The Texas scientist his name “Faloons” and I took a little bit of liberty and saying that he was a man came up with the idea of project amber, hope you don’t mind too much. Projects we’re not around him call him dr. looney because I think it’s funny and there’s not a whole lot of humor in our lives . You also have to let me know how I did on Ashton’s personality portrayal I had just read it but the only part I can remember was that he sometimes made rash choices “ so I figured hey Logan is about to make a rash decision why not have Ashton do it with him.” And no apparently Logan is not above begging , XD
Feb 4, 2022
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Dyla N
Boo I thought you’re going to have them actually execute a plan pol and then gives me an idea Matly’s next so I’m thinking that maybe the Texas Mustelidae may not be as advanced as the other ones maybe it’s newer maybe it’s older I’m not sure which whatever it is it’ll happen as I write it either way it doesn’t have security cameras They don’t have a shape shifter there that doesn’t mean they can’t try to escape when they hear about this plan because eavesdropping is a thing. The Texas scientist have heard about it from the other scientist because as Roxanne mentioned they were security cameras i’m just going to say that they have audio sometimes as well as video. Of course i’m remembering my own character correctly Marley isn’t want to break the rules but Logan is since I don’t see that you come up with the other character yet we just won’t mention them yet
Feb 4, 2022
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Dyla N
I’ll do Mateo for three then after that maybe you can do Roxanne, after roxanne i’ll do Marley that leaves Ashton for you, i’d do Marley now except i have an idea for Mateo.
So our order
Lexi
Cam
Mateo
Roxanne
Marley
Ashton
That’s why we’re still alternating that’s why we’re still alternating and we have a sort of pattern. Normally I’d ask if you were any objections or something but I’m gonna go right this chapter now so by the time I see them and be too late lol sorry.
And darn you stole Opal i had aVague idea of doing a fireable and all bowl and I vague idea of doing fireable and audible and then being twins but that’s okay I have other ones I can use Nothing it really matters but Is Opal i’m boring or girl? I’m assuming dylan is male...
Feb 2, 2022
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Dyla N
P.S just saw your post that kind of works especially with what I just wrote chapter 1 “Mateo really call me Lexi. He says that alexa-Sophia fits me better.” So maybe at least in this case Mateo came up with that name.
That idea works fine as long as, if we make more characters in the future their names still start with the same letter as a gym there and use the word I’m a little OCD about that lol.
Feb 2, 2022
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Dyla N
Chapter 1 is done it might need editing I don’t know but chapter 1 is done it might need editing I don’t know but it’s done .
Feb 2, 2022
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Dyla N
Kay o’ll probably start wiyh... well i was gonna say Mayeo but i guess Lexi makes more sense i just don’t know how to do emotionless...
Feb 2, 2022
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Dyla N
Oh! p.S we’ll need relationships for everybody we kinda know some but eventually they’re all going to meet I assume.
Feb 2, 2022
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Dyla N
Cool! Just posted Lexi’s friend too, funny Ashton dosen’t resemble Amber much in apoearence. Also intresting, Mateo, Lexi’s friend , isteased by the other projects due to his power and conduit. So now we have...
Roxanne - Tuby
ashton - Amber
Mateo - Morganite
lexi - aquamarine/Sapphire
Marley - Mint spinel/ amethyst
And Cam - clear Quartz and Peridot
That’s six should we call it good? , i’m not counting the scientists , except Emerson and Roxanne’s dad The rest of them are just kind of ther. Of course other projects will get mentioned in passing like the ones who make fun of mateo I don’t think I need to make a kinds of information for them.
And we just have to choose who gets POVs and which one of us is going to do the first chapter lol.
Feb 2, 2022
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Dyla N
Cool! I find “red-tinted skin” a bit odd but kinda cool to. So we need some way yo tie them in. My one idea is Lexi learns about them and saves them from their lab but she’d have to care OR hehe
She could hear about Cam and, realizing that he is a dual infused like her she could go after them, saving Roxanne by chance. She wouldn’t necessarily have to be caring in that case.
And (taises hand)
1. How do Cam and Roxanne relete?
2. Does Roxanne’s power work on Lexi, I guess that’s kind of an odd question since I’m the one who should know the answer to that but as I said in her description Lexi us term emitionless.
3. When they meet assuming that the three of them eat they would eventually have to have relationship to each other so what would that be?
I’ll cooy out theur info and make a few characters... i had another question... oh right is Roxanne still a scyentists daughter?
Feb 2, 2022
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Dyla N