Any suggestions for my RU Team?

Question

Never done it. Wanna try! Let's go!

Durant (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Hustle
EVs: 4 Def, 252 Atk, 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
Hone Claws
X-Scissor
Metal Claw
Shadow Claw

Lanturn (F) @ Leftovers
Trait: Volt Absorb
EVs: 4 Spe, 252 HP, 252 SpAtk
Modest Nature
Attract
Protect
Toxic
Water Pulse

Moltres (X) @ Life Orb
Trait: Pressure
EVs: 4 HP, 252 SpAtk, 252 Spe
Timid Nature
Sunny Day
Flamethrower
Solarbeam
Hidden Power {GROUND}

Kabutops (M) @ Choice Band
Trait: Battle Armor
EVs: 4 Def, 252 Atk, 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
Slash
Brick Break
Night Slash
Aqua Tail

Nidoqueen (F) @ Leftovers
Trait: Poison Point
EVs: 4 SpDef, 252 HP, 252 Def
Impish Nature
Toxic Spikes
Poison Fang
Iron Tail
Aerial Ace

Primeape (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Anger Point
EVs: 4 HP, 252 Atk, 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
Cross Chop
Earthquake
Thunder Wave
SmellingSalt

That would be the Pokemon!

Comments

I think I'll try rating this.

Answer 1

Durant

Change nature to Jolly and make the EVs 252 Atk/ 252 Spe/ 4 HP. Other then that this set seems good, two STAB moves, Hone Claws and whatnot. Not many comments here ;)
_____

Lanturn

Fortunately Lanturn has Thunder Wave so use that instead of Attract. I'll assume Protect is for healing purposes...If you want to run a status setter try this EV spread: 252 Spe/ 252 Def/ 4 SDef. Timid (+Spe, -Atk) or Bold (+Def, -Atk) Nature.
_____

Moltres

This isn't really a sun team, take off Sunny Day and Solarbeam both for different moves. You can use Heat Wave (Power + STAB) and Air Slash (Power + STAB).
_____

Kabutops

Take off Slash for Rapid Spin and make Kabutops a Rapid Spinner as Moltres needs one. Give it Stone Edge rather than Night Slash. It's fine otherwise.
___

Nidoqueen

No comment here, but I recommend Earth Power for STAB.
_____

Primeape

Seed Bomb rather than SmellingSalt to cover against Ground types like Quagsire. Punishment instead of Thunder Wave as Punishment to those Psychic and Ghost types who think they are royalty and can set up before your very eyes.
___

Hope I helped.

Comments

Usually anything that wants bulk and isn't a dedicated wall is going to want to run HP EVs rather than EVs in just one defensive stat ;). But for the most part this looks good.

---

I finally understood your comment xD
Anyway thanks Ben.