Rate My OU Team

Question

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Skarmory @???
Ability : Keen Eye
EVs : 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 Def
IVs : 31/31/31/xx/31/31
Nature : Impish
-Steel Wing
-Brave Bird
-Spikes
-Roost

Skarmory comes in first and will try to lay a maximum of 3 Spikes. If he fails to reach this then I hope it atleast gets in a one spikes. Any ideas on what item??

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Aggron @ Leftovers
Ability : Heavy Metal
EVs : 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 HP
IVs : 31/31/31/31/31/31
Nature : Impish
-Heavy Slam
-Metal Burst
-Earthquake
-Stone Edge

Aggron will be my next Pokemon. With his massive Def he'll probably live through any non-fighting Physical move. My Pokémon of choice to follow skarmory with since his Heavy Metal makes his Heavy Slam move get a base power of 120 to alot of pokemon, and 100 to some.

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Talonflame @ Nothing
Ability : Gale Wings
EVs : 252 Atk / 252 Spd / 4 HP
IVs : 31/31/31/xx/31/31
Nature : Adamant
-Flare Blitz
-U-turn
-Acrobatics
-Tailwind

Talonflame sparks the start of my Speed assault. With priority for gale wings and u-turn I can switch out to others as I please to avoid nasty water and rock moves, and potentially refilling my Tailwinds. His Acrobatics also gives him a chance to be a potential sweeper.

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Greninja @ Life Orb
Ability : Protean
EVs : 252 Sp.Atk / 252 Spd / 4 HP
IVs : 31/xx/31/31/31/31
Nature : Timid
-Hydro Pump
-Dark Pulse
-Ice Beam
-Mat Block

Greninja, my dear talented sweeper. In triple battles he's triple the threat he is singles. With 1.5x STAB every move and speed that let him outpace the average contender he never fails to make me love him (except when stupid faster pokes comes along).

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Mega Garchomp @ Garchompite
Ability : Sand Force
EVs : 252 Atk / 252 Spd / 4 Def
IVs : 31/31/31/31/31/31
Nature : Adamant
-Dragon Claw
-Earthquake
-Crunch
-Swords Dance

I will admit that with Garchomp on Triples on with Greninja and Talonflame he is an intense sweeper.

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Lucario @ Black Belt
Ability : Steadfast
EVs : 252 Atk / 252 Spd
IVs : 31/31/31/31/31/31
Nature : Jolly
-Close Combat
-Earthquake
-Extremespeed
-Swords Dance

Another potential murderer of mine.
Tell me what you think! Try to be nice I'm newbish
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Comments

Whoah. Dat Garchomp. Much manly. I want one now.

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Haha I know I didn't expect a pink one :P

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I think leftovers will work well with aggron, and skarmory should hold sitrus berry.

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Thanks NOBY, I've kept that in mind :)

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* Brave Bird has more power, I know Acrobatics doesn't cause damage, but I always thought of Talonflame as a suicide attacker anyway.
* Skarmory's item can be either Red Card or Sitrus Berry. Ability is Sturdy. You can use Ability Capsule to change this, or just re-breed.
* Alternate item suggestion for Greninja or Lucario is Focus Sash, with the other getting/keeping the Life Orb.
* If triples, I expect a lot more Protect or other support moves like Wide Guard/Light Screen/Reflect/etc. actually. This looks like a solid Singles team, though. You also need to get rid of Mat Block for Singles. Only costs Heart Scale to get it back anyway. Mat Block is Triples gold, of course.

Answer 1

yeah...6 IV shinies...not cool...poke generater...
Whatever lol
1.Skarmory should hold leftovers,and i think the evs should be 252 hp 252 defense and 4 speed. That is what i run on my skarmory, and i think the ability should be sturdy. Also, i run brave bird, roost, spikes, and whirlwind.
2.I think that you should run life orb Talonflame and have brave bird, flare blitz, roost, and maybe bulk up or u-turn.
3.I would change mat block to u-turn or grass knot. And yeahhh.......it is your Greninja im talking about.
4.I would change crunch to iron head or poison jab for fairy coverage on your Garchomp.
5.I would make the lucario have Crunch for psychic type coverage, close combat, extreme speed, and swords dance. It should hold a life orb.
Remember, these are just opinions. You can keep whatever you want to keep. Also, don't pokegen these pokemon. -_- my friend went and pokegened shiny pokemon with perfect ivs....i told him he was a cheater xD lol :D. He gave me a bunch of shiny pokemon to use, and i did ask someone to rate my team on another post, and if you saw it, you would see a 6 iv shiny mega gengar...lol. That is the only pokegened pokemon on my team lol.

Comments

I appreciate your opinion but I do take offense on being called hacker since I am not one. I got these from someone else

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Sorry, I was kind of ticked off since I just recently battled someone with 6 shiny legendaries...and they weren't japanese so i assumed those were generated. I did win since that guy was probably a little kid and thought attacking helps you win. 0-0

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...you do realise he didn't even say this was a WiFi Battle team..?

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Sorry, this is a wifi battle team