Please rate my Gen 8 OU team

Question

Hi (Azelf) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Stealth Rock
- Dazzling Gleam
- Explosion
- Taunt

Spoopy (Dragapult) (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Infiltrator
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Dragon Dance
- Dragon Darts
- Phantom Force
- Psychic Fangs

Thor (Thundurus-Therian) (M) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Volt Absorb
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Nasty Plot
- Thunderbolt
- Sludge Wave
- Psychic

Super Macho Man (Hawlucha) (M) @ Electric Seed
Ability: Unburden
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Brave Bird
- Close Combat
- Thunder Punch

Die! (Tapu Koko) @ Light Clay
Ability: Electric Surge
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Thunder Punch
- U-turn
- Reflect
- Light Screen

Long Range Stab (Keldeo-Resolute) @ Choice Specs
Ability: Justified
EVs: 4 Atk / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Hasty Nature
- Icy Wind
- Hydro Pump
- Air Slash
- Secret Sword

Please let me know what to do to make this team better, and please be polite.

Comments

Questionable Pokémon choices

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Bruh this ain't a hyper offense. Hyper offense is a play style that literally has no defensive pokemon. Try something like this

https://pokepast.es/3c1aab8e23fe39f9

If you wanna use the ho play style, then you need to use a team that is full of offensive mons. One or two sweepers and two or three wall breakers. The most common ones are usually with screens support to give longevity on your hitters. A team cannot be considered as 'hyper offense' if it has even a single defensive mon

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Ok thank you! I will fix up the team.

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The team was fixed, just needa upload it. I would also like alternate item choices for my mons.

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Life orb over sash on Dragapult. You want to be killing stuff with this and not surviving with one hp

Screens Koko. If you're ever gonna use Koko on hyper offense, then only use screens. This mon can easily derail when using specs set and its high speed means that it can easily get a screen up

Add Hawlucha. A hyper offense is not hyper offense without its mascot. It also pairs well with Koko by giving it electric seed

Don't use Tornadus on hyper offense. This mon sucks balls on ho because it cannot aim its hurricanes. Offensive Tornadus, which your set btw sucks because you should be using nasty plot and boots, is better on rain, balance or bulky offense where it has some backbone if your hurricanes miss. Replace this with Garchomp or Volcarona or any of the wall breakers in the tier

Necrozma is questionable. It's vulnerable to nearly everything in ou with all the rampant u turns and knocks offs. That's not even mentioning how it is utterly walled by literally every steel type in the tier. Use mons that are more reliable such as Rillaboom or Kartana. Even Bisharp would do well on hp due to how it deters defog and I believe it can learn a fighting move for Zamazenta

Put taunt and explosion over any of Azelf's moves. It's moveset should contain explosion, taunt and stealth rock. The last one can be anything you want. If you are ever gonna use Azelf, then it should only be for one reason, it's high speed. This allows you to set up stealth rock and allow your hard hitting teammates to come in for free

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Okay, thank you for the advice! I made some more changes.