Wall for BM™ (page 38)

Actually it says he's twelve by the first World Martial Arts Tournament he fights in. Which means he's about fifteen by the second. Imagine him being older than me and half my height smh my head. That tiger skin though. Regardless, I still want them to be around Gohan's age, and you said he was... what, around seven by the Frieza arc? Or am I thinking of something else? If that's true, and they were about his age and introduced to him early on in the plot, that would make them small kids.

Small Giru Saiyan (she's a far bigger brat than she is tall)

As I said, it's all in all better than I expected. But of course, nitpicking.

"Over the next decade or so, they lived in the massive jungle"
...You mean these are older kids? Wow, big lame. Personally, I liked them being roughly around Gohan's age. Of course his age would depend on the point in the story, but small Gohan hanging around small Bee Saiyan and small Giru Saiyan is actually pretty amusing. The advantage to them being older is that they could, and likely would, act like little kids still, which would also be funny. But that aside, small Saiyans for the win.

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO sexy. what school?

spill the tea

What the heck happened to Giru Saiyan and Bee Saiyan? You've made no mention of parents. Are they dead or something? How long ago has, say, Bee Saiyan been on his own? Where are those kids, anyway? Got important backstory questions here.

rear appendage

"I named my shiny Xurkitree Xurkitree."
Autocorrect you son of a-
I meant Xurkit.

I have a shiny Buzzwole named Bee Pen if that counts. I think I named my shiny Xurkitree Xurkitree.

Titlen't

- I assumed that if pulling on it just... makes a kid so weak he can't even hold up a Dragon Ball, losing it would weaken you at least a little. Or at the very least hurt like hell. It also seems to throw off balance (which is forgotten about after five minutes in Dragon Ball, very unfortunate because it was a wonderful touch and I loved it) until you adjust to no longer having a rear appendage. Who wouldn't want to watch gimpy Giru Saiyan stumbling around and crying about her destroyed pride or something? Also, Bee Pen ripping off Pickle Oh how blatantly shameless. And in the same series too. Like really mate? I said I wanted her to lose her tail, not that I wanted her to lose it in such a lame way.

If you wanted it to be over-the-top, why'd you ask me if I wanted it to be serious or not? I said serious. Sheesh. On the plus side, you said they're bad, so I'm right. Gotta savor the little victories.

Yeah I don't even care about the title at this point

- That one might be even more stupid. Show me an example of a Saiyan's tail being pulled off. I feel like that hasn't happened, but feel free to prove me wrong. If he pulled off her tail somehow (how do you even do that? That'd be like ripping off someone's arm), she would probably kick him in the crotch and never talk to him again or something like that. I assure you, she would not forgive him for tearing off the "one thing that makes her a Saiyan", most likely even if he wished it back (which really ruins the Dragon Ball search plot). Why would he even rip off her tail to begin with? Again, doesn't sound easy. Not like an "accident". Would it be funny for him to come along on her Dragon Ball mission when she despises him? Most likely. But a couple of laughs is not worth such a stupid plan. Would it be funny if she ripped out his eyeballs by accident and had to wish them back? Actually, don't answer that. At this point, it spontaneously falling off would be a better idea, and that just sucks. Couldn't she at least lose her tail to something a little more realistic than her apparent best friend who just permanently weakens her on accident ("oopsie, I broke my best friend's leg so bad that it can't be repaired")?
- {Oh yeah, you're definitely dim enough to accidently rip off someone's tail with that taste in hair. And yes, that's sarcasm. It's still a stupid idea.}

Seriously mate. This the best you can do?