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I need some help with my OU team. Any suggestions could be helpful. I kind of just started off with hawlucha since its my favorite pokemon, and went from there. I dont know how to put in sprites so my bad.

Hawk Hogen (Hawlucha) (M) @ Power Herb
Ability: Limber
EVs: 128 HP / 252 Atk / 128 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Roost
- Sky Attack
- High Jump Kick
- Stone Edge

Tangrowth (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Regenerator
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 244 HP / 216 Def / 48 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Leech Seed
- Sleep Powder
- Giga Drain
- Knock Off

Azumarill (F) @ Sitrus Berry
Ability: Huge Power
EVs: 92 HP / 252 Atk / 164 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Belly Drum
- Aqua Jet
- Play Rough
- Knock Off

Sableye-Mega (M) @ Sablenite
Ability: Magic Bounce
EVs: 252 HP / 112 Def / 144 Spe
Careful Nature
- Foul Play
- Will-O-Wisp
- Recover
- Toxic

Heatran (M) @ Air Balloon
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 SpD
Timid Nature
- Stealth Rock
- Fire Blast
- Flash Cannon
- Stone Edge

Mamoswine (M) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Oblivious
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Ice Shard
- Stealth Rock
- Earthquake
- Knock Off

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Hawlucha's place in this team itself is questionable.
First, Unburden would be a more sensible choice for Hawlucha's speed doubles. Besides, Mamoswine and Sableye-mega can absorb paralysis. Then, the EVs are quite messed up. Hawlucha's HP should not be capitalized on. I would recommend 252 Atk / 252 Spe / 4 SpD instead, you can outspeed the whole tier with it after Unburden boost.
Sky Attack + Power Herb isn't very good; it's an unidimensional move you only get to use once. Roost on Hawlucha is also questionable since its bulk is terrible. I'd use SubSD Sitrus Berry instead.

Onto the rest, it looks way more defensive than it should. If it's Semi-Stall, Hawlucha doesn't really have its place therein. The team could perform well but it is undefined and looks like some hasty work. I failed to see the coherence. It may be a lot better than my criticism makes it look.

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I can't seem to find anything wrong.
This seems like a decent team.
But the power herb on Hawlucha seems questionable.
I feel like he would do more damage with Swords Dance and focus sash instead of Stone Edge.
And life orb on Mamowsine, he's tanky enough to take the recoil.
Hope i helped a bit!

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