Please rate my new and improved Uber team.

Question

Doexys-S @ Focus Sash
Trait: Pressure
EVs: 252 HP / 4 SAtt / 252 Spe
Role: Lead
Modest
- Spikes
- Stealth Rock
- Recover
- Psychic

Doexys is basically tasked with using his flabbergasting speed to set up spikes and stealth rock, with the help of recover to regain HP for setting up more hazards. I invested some EVs in HP to allow him hopefully to take a few hits, but im not sure if this is a good idea or not.

Excadrill @ Expert Belt
Trait: Mold Breaker
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Att / 252 Spe
Role: Physical Sweeper/Spinner
Jolly
- Swords Dance
- Earthquake
- Brick Break
- Rapid Spin

Excadrill's job is to clean out screens and entry hazards whilst destroying the opposing team. The Expert Belt is because with Earthquake and Brick Break he covers 10 types, which should allow him to make good use of it.

Rayquaza @ Persim Berry
Trait: Air Lock
EVs: 4 HP / 128 Att / 128 SAtt / 252 Spe
Role: Mixed sweeper
Hardy
- Outrage
- Extremespeed
- Surf
- Thunder

Not much to say about Rayquaza here, the fact that he is mixed instead of Physical/Special allows him to dispatch Physical and Special Walls/Tanks. Rayquaza is holding the Persim berry instaed of the Lum berry so that it does not get used up by a status problem before it can heal Rayquaza's confusion, a side-effect of his super heavy hitting Outrage.

Kyogre @ Leftovers
Trait: Drizzle
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtt / 252 Spe
Role: Special sweeper
Modest
- Hydro Pump/Surf
- Blizzard/Ice Beam
- Thunder
- Calm Mind

Jellicent @ Leftovers
Trait: Cursed Body
EVs: 252 HP / 128 Def / 128 SDef
Role: Wall
Bold
- Toxic
- Protect
- Recover
- Surf

Jellicent is a beastly wall, using Toxic to poison the enemy, then stalling by spamming Protect and Recover. Jellicent can wall almost anything, so long as it's not a steel or poison
type. With Surf for an attacking move, Jellicent is capable of packing a punch, as well as walling with the best of 'em.

Zekrom @ Choice Band
Trait: Teravolt
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Att / 252 Spe
Role: Physical Freight Train
Jolly
- Bolt Strike
- Outrage
- Fusion Bolt
- Volt Switch

Zekrom is in this case, a heavy hitting truck. 'Nuff said.

So, there you go. Please give suggestions for each pokemon, along with a letter grade. Also, If you think a pokemon could be replaced with something more beneficial, please do tell. Thanks in advance - Swagg

Comments

A little more readable, added pics

Answer 1

Alright, I'm just browsing some of the old Uber Qs, and I thought I'd answer this. ;D

OK, Deoxys lead here.
Current Grade: B-
Uh, he would definitely not be able to take hits. Replace Recover for Thunder Wave to spread some status. Psychic for Magic Coat. I LOVE that move. It completely surprises other leads, and I just love it when hazards or Taunts are bounced back. It beats Pranksters too!
Uh... Hasty nature for more Spd. I could just write you up a new set, but I find that always annoys me when people do that, so I'm doing this for now.

Excadrill, your spinner.
Current Grade: A+
I like Excadrill, always thought he looked cool. Anyway, great job. No Expert Belt, it doesn't give you the boost you need. Might want to get some HP EVs so you'll survive :P Watch out for ghosties!

Rayquaza, your mixed sweeper.
Current Grade: B
Uh...wat? That set just doesn't work. He rages without Choice, dispatches walls without diversity? Try something different, without Outrage. This enables you to get a different item, and another move slot. Life Orb works amazing for special sweepers, and lose some SP. Defense for some Speed. You won't survive an Ice Beam anyhow, will you? You could keep Hardy, it's just preference. Last move slot try Dragon Pulse. Put more EVs into Atk than Sp. Atk, as you've only got the priority move.

Current Grade: A
You using lefties? Need more HP EVs. Try 128 HP/128 Sp. atk/252 Sp. Def. Use Hydro Pump over Surf and Ice Beam over Blizzard. Oh, and just wanted to note your explanations stopped here XD

Love the Jellicent. A+

Current Grade: B+
First off, Choice Scarf. You need Speed.
Only use Bolt Strike, or Fusion Bolt. Replace the other move for Stone Edge.