Wall for Gau (page 43)

So I didn’t actually think about the location at first because I didn’t know what mattered chances were just supposed to be short stories however, I do have a couple ideas now
The first idea is probably the simplest one have it take place entirely andjhoto(because there’s a big forest there and that’s wheredager what is live, class is species native to the region I believe.
Thalia other idea is to have the pro one take place inJhoto where Lyvia lives but have the main story take place in life Alola because it’s an island infamy island says treasure hunting so I’d be OK with either one of those ideas you can pick which one you’d rather do
As for his trap I don’t really know how to explain it, except” camouflage, net drive” probably would’ve made it out of vines so that it would be London and I thought of pictured hanging from a tree branch quite a bit off the ground I mean not so much that if she fell out, she would get hurt, but definitely high enough to be intimidating

Not sure, I have much to say about the
Mostly, I just wanted it to consist ofPyv and Dager meeting, and she comes up with a name Aleve to you because I don’t know I just thought it sounded cool. I kind of want to show her being alone her Clancy self and that’s how she gets caught in the trap that.Scuther sets. they would be a basically one-sided argument.where Lyvia is yelling at him to let her go and whatnot and at first she really doesn’t want to because she’s a trespasser. but then I’m thinking a little ways into the argument. he decides he likes her attitude after all that’s when he cuts her down and dig this way through her bag. Of course, she’ll protest this until he catches himself. if you want him, there could be a little quick piece of her parents sending her on her journey, but I don’t think that’s necessary. It could probably just get mentioned in the story itself. if it needs to be mentioned at all..
And I think that’s all I have gone for the purple one. Do you want me to go on for the story or? because I only have her that really is some kind of treasure hunt. I know very creative of me..

*pat* It’s okay, you don’t have to be scared of the mob farm

Sorry, make it one word. It’s a pun, albeit a bad one so it should look like
Fun girl. As in fungus as in myshroom…

Awesome
Minor question, i was using vouceover so wasn’t seeing the screen. Is “fungil” on her shirt should be that  one word if it is ignore this. If not can you fix it? It’s a stupid pun but this IS Lyv soo…?

Contingency

I’ve actually decided to jump ship and try for something else, a shiny mukahita. I don’t have a good form of anything in the jagmoo-o evolution line, so I’m going for something else at the moment. Thanks for your advice though.

Thanks!

Early enter, I was trying to say that way he could use evolving and then transforming as an excuse free when he acts and or injured, and I think a prologue would be a good idea I kind of have an idea for a short plotToo.

Oops my bad, I’d say… 10 or 12 not sure which one would fit better.I had meant to say that he has a quirky nature, because he’s kind of an attention seeker for the same time he’s serious.
I think he could evolve prior to transforming. that way he can kind of use that.as an excuse when acts illl or hurt.