Wall for Ditto (page 192)

So um if i change yhe name can i borrow that OCs story? I’d just do it if it weren’t for the fact that I knew where the idea came from and it wasn’t m. If you say no that’s fine i understand. Oh BTW got my fletchling finally! Now he’s a super cool Talonflame!

I'm having mild difficulty finding where I told you to make your characters cute.

"Does that not sound edgy/emo/like Raid but not cute to you?"
"Also, I wasn't aware my characters had to look cute"

Re-read that a couple times. "Like Raid but not cute".

Ahh, in yhat case, he sounds pretty cool i like yhe backstory to bad he was judt an arbitrary character because the backstory would fit minus the pokemon larys like… he could still lose his parents as a kid and be taken in by the evil org. I’m picturing the evil org would send him to FA to gain intel but while there he makes friends what’s some of the other student.  Which makes him *** tribute to the realization that he doesn’t want to hurt any of them since that’s what the email organization wants to do get the information they can and then destroy the Academ. He could even still lose an eye but it could be because it was a punishment for him not doing what you’re supposed to d. Like what happened during some sort of vacation that they go on and we can spa he just tells the other students that there was an accident… hmm I really like this character but I’m theoretically building with kind of up to you since he’s your character and more less steaming the idea well kinda… he’d probably be a Dragonology student he could befriend a dragon there as well as humans.

- He wears black and red (and purple).
- He looks "sinister".
- He's apparently impure and gets his eye stolen.
- OMGEE TRADGIC BACKSTORI!1!11!!11
- Yellow eyes and black hair just sounds edgy. Think about it. He has dark hair and (likely) "piercing" yellow eyes staring from under said hair. Also he looks sinister. Does that not sound edgy/emo/like Raid but not cute to you?
- He's part of an evil team for some time.
- He can "connect" with Ghost-types to talk to his dead parents...? What? Since when did that happen in-
- You fight him in a graveyard. Look I know his parents are dead but what kind of people hang out in graveyards?

All in all, yeah, he sounds kinda edgy.

He's your OC. You can figure it out.

He sounds kinda edgy (and reminds me of Enneth a bit), but not bad.

Pogo

Er ih hang on ! Lol. If yhis is for Fringe its gonna need changes. fringe isn’t even a pokemon story. If its not yhen Draco seems pretty cool. I’ll happilly use a version of him if ya like. If you want too here are the revs;
Name
Age: (19-20)
Class/programs (list on fringe avademy post)
Alpearence
Personality

Just for kicks; relationship to ty (Tyesha)

Why did you want to know if a random person on the Internet knew about a very random fanfic, a very horrible one at that.

You seem pretty sus. I can't even remember your previous username now